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Fourteen….

OK, I have decided to try my hand at the writing of a short story in sixty words or less…

They lay in bed, she asleep. He smoking a cigarette while lusting after her naked womanhood. What a body she had he thought, for a woman of twenty four. Thinking about the passionate lovemaking they just finished, made his manhood start to harden again. He stroked his beard, smiling….. If only he knew…she was really only fourteen! Liar!

Sorry if I seem to have sex on the brain! smily smily

Anyway, looking forward to tomorrow evening. TGIF when it arrives.

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8 Responses to “Fourteen….”

  1. Stunner Says:
    July 20th, 2006 at 11:54 pm LOL! fi real, sex is on yuh mind! Very good one Dr. D!
  2. Charles Says:
    July 21st, 2006 at 2:18 am Excellent Doc!It seems that great minds think alike….check out mi most recent poem at mi other site playfuldementia.com. I wrote it about 2 yrs. ago after some heavy lovemaking with a fiery little chica….I was digging through some old school books and found it.
  3. kami Says:
    July 21st, 2006 at 6:59 am You and Marc got sex on the brain nuh Good story tho with some real life happennings
  4. jdid Says:
    July 21st, 2006 at 10:31 am nice one kami ya best hope some more female bloggers show up at the gathering if not ya in trouble -)
  5. Shotta M Says:
    July 21st, 2006 at 12:52 pm Very clever…
  6. guyana-gyal Says:
    July 21st, 2006 at 2:34 pm You been reading Harlequin books, Dr. D? Wait, she’s only 14? There was a scandal here about a 30-something year old businessman who had a 14 yr. old girlfriend and the mother encourage the relationship, send them off to Barbados and so on. Then the mother want to break up the relationship. The likkle girl get lock up in a place for juveniles [because she didn’t want to stop being with the man]. The man was walking free, the mother walking free and the chile get locked up. Terrible.
  7. Leon Says:
    July 21st, 2006 at 7:47 pm Wow, she must be well endowed to fool my friend there.
  8. Mad Bull Says:
    July 21st, 2006 at 10:38 pm I like the story, Doc! It sounds like something that happened to you for real though! Sorry I didn’t get to link you today. Long story. Maybe I’ll blog it when I get some energy. Anyway, I will shout you tomorrow…